Show me your songs!

Sylvanas

I feel like bard songs don't get shown off nearly as often as they should be.

So here's a few of mine. Feedback is always appreciated!

Pray

You pray so hard

bloody knees in mud

chapped lips whispering

kill, kill, kill

Shriek! A demon comes

lips across ragged tongue

kill, kill, kill

you'd better pray!

that death comes swiftly

Time to Die

There is no escape

you're cornered in the dark

I want to hear you scream!

draw your last terrified breaths

You've always run

but now you're trapped

there's nowhere to flee to

and now it's time

time to die!

This is a very old poem I wrote. I use the first 8 lines for a song:

Long before the life of Lusternia began

before a spark came into being, twas devoid,

neither good nor bad, neither inhabited nor empty,

it could be said it didn't exist.

Yet it did, and within this void of unknowing

came a single spark of life, just a twinkle,

a single mind, a consciousness if you will,

being known as Yudhe in the end.

Yudhe knew nothing of this world as he reached,

touching nothing, and with no others to sense,

he knew he was everything but nothing, and for that

a great, mournful cry would have rang out.

For though Yudhe was very much alive

as he reached out further to the brink,

unable to find anyone, knowing he was all,

he knew the ultimate pain of loneliness.

And my last one, about Avechna!

Nine ascended a mountain peak

for the very last stand

existence hanging by a thread

they knew the only answer

essence of nine intertwined

from it born the Avenger

to defeat the monster Kethuru

victory was the only option

and so fate came true