Can zaps be changed to deal flat magic damage. It's just so weird that 'a charge of energy, drawing from one of the Nine Domoths' would be stuck with electricity, rather than a broader source (from mostly an aesthetic point of view).
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These things happen. Marcella is well known (proudly, I think) for being caustic character, so if you intend to have further dealings with her, it's just something to keep in mind. As to whether or not her nature carries into OO…
As the golden chalice's contents are engulfed in Nil fire, the air thickens and the fog at everyone's feet begins to twist around like a living thing, a smog coated serpent coiling around its captured prey.
Then they're a fairly tall illithoid, imo. The usually-probably-accepted standard for height is roughly 6" per point of size stat, but of course that's subject to points beyond the mean and the fact that size considers weight as well.
But really, more on the topic, remember that at least half of your careful planning will probably go to waste. I remember planning weeks for a certain wedding for it to just not happen as a res…
I don't deny that editing perms for reviewers would be a benefit in some cases, but what I'm saying is that the problems likely to come from it will shoot down its uses.