Descriptions (proofreading/editing/revising please!)

Aeral

I have no idea where to post this since the forums were restructured, and I hate them. IRE, give me back my original forums that you always had.

Anyway, if someone could read over this and give some input:

She is a regal aslaran demigoddess and is covered by a coat of short, midnight fur flecked with silvery gray. Like her male counterparts, she has a long regal mane that ends mid-back in ragged edges. Her bangs have been tucked behind her large ears, most of them caught up in loose, small braids accented with wooden beads and feathers. Her ashen eyes are streaked with cerulean, the same hue as her long whiskers. A distinctly feline nose rests just above thin lips that reveal dagger-like teeth. Upon her neck are three clean, almost perfectly parallel scars, faded although the fur never regrew in place. At just shy of seven feet tall, her long inky tail nearly matches her height in length and ends in a tuft of cobalt fur.